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do you have the time to read this poem and comment?
Posted under skin rejuvenationOctober Rain
Some may look out their window with disdain
Grass needs a cut; the puddles growing wide
As in a gentle shower falls the rain
I could not make myself stay kept inside
And barefoot stepped out in the yard to feel
The raindrops pelting gently on my skin
Rejuvenation comes – it’s very real
As saturation of my clothes so thin
They clinging damply to my tiny frame
As twirling leaves are washing in the ditch
My hair is dripping softened and untamed
October rain beckons … these moments rich
Should I attempt to pass this moment by?
Ignore the feelings growing in my mind
To stay within my house where it is dry?
Or should I dance in reverie defined
DANCE GIRL, DANCE!!!!!!!!!!!
oh, you have written something so beautifully that I have been trying to do for 8 days. Dancing in the rain!
beautiful write!
love the images here
Bravo my friend BRAVO!
DANCE GIRL, DANCE!!!!!!!!!!!
oh, you have written something so beautifully that I have been trying to do for 8 days. Dancing in the rain!
beautiful write!
love the images here
Bravo my friend BRAVO!
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pppfftttt
kick those slippers of your feet girl
squish up mud tween toes while you twirl
Mind the lawn! sidestep or two
(almost toe-squished doggy-dooo)
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Hey, you’re in ‘bama, you can shower in the rain, even in October..
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Wonderful writing, BBR. I love how you’ve actually captured the mood of the day and the feeling of going out in the rain. Love it. Thanks for sharing.
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friends, shirley.
I feel the same and I have a true love for seasonal poems… yours does the genre justice, plus it is a bit playful!
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As soon – as I heard – dancing in the rain – I thought of Ma. I remember – she wrote something about the rain, dancing and dogs. That time again – go – you nature loving creatures ?
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/158/418808114_f69b01f83f.jpg
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Dance on! =D
Dance like you’ve got ants in your pants….
and bees on your knees….
teehee
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Dance, girl, dance!
Get drenched by life,
it’s all we have.
enjoyed this
ma
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I myself have seen those October rains. Its now a cold rain and reminds me of those hot summer rains. My toes and feet are cold and seeing those leaves and trees changing colors reminding us that winter is coming soon.Dance while you can till winter changes into spring once more. Oh heck i loved this poem .. Star for you sweetie.
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B E A utiful! Rejuvenation comes – it’s very real. Way to make the most of the rain!
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this is beautiful
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dance where ever your heart leads you
i thought I had starred this, and my star this function doesn’t work for me all the time, can’t get back to them, it tells me they are private!
and i’m most glad i just read this again, after a short walk, a sit under a pokeberry bush, with animals crunching in the trees, and that old log….well….as I came out of my wooded thoughts, I forgot to dance….
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You’re talented. Thanks so much for sharing your poem with us. Good stuff. Nicely done.
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